All Comments on 'Josh Meets Carmen Pt. 03'

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UKCuddlyGuyUKCuddlyGuy11 months ago

Again, great story building - but please please please include translations with the Spanish... I think "gringo" is obvious to everyone else, but the rest of it just breaks the flow unless you understand Spanish (which I'd argue most people on the internet don't)

OnThefence2OnThefence211 months ago

You are killing me! I can't believe that you ended the chapter when you did. Please don't keep me waiting too long for the next installment.

Michell408Michell40811 months ago

You got me hook, line and sinker…. You got one one of the best stories going and loved all 3 parts and can’t wait for more …. And I mean more PLEASE….

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

English translation on what Josh said to Carmen's Mom

No mom. Carmen is stunning. Carmen is lovely. Carmen is beautiful. Carmen is divine."

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

This is great story and will have to wait for the continued episodes.

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