by MariaTrans694U
Again, great story building - but please please please include translations with the Spanish... I think "gringo" is obvious to everyone else, but the rest of it just breaks the flow unless you understand Spanish (which I'd argue most people on the internet don't)
You are killing me! I can't believe that you ended the chapter when you did. Please don't keep me waiting too long for the next installment.
You got me hook, line and sinker…. You got one one of the best stories going and loved all 3 parts and can’t wait for more …. And I mean more PLEASE….
English translation on what Josh said to Carmen's Mom
No mom. Carmen is stunning. Carmen is lovely. Carmen is beautiful. Carmen is divine."