All Comments on 'Journey Into Submission Ch. 01'

To say I?m impressed would be an understatement, it takes allot to get a balance of sexiness but keep the story well written at the same time.

There are very few stories that push me to write a public comment but this story is fantastically written, sexy and intelligent. Loved it and cant wait for the next chapter!

Sexy_nimph

Very nice beginning .. am looking forward to the rest of the tale... nice balance and good strong writing

Very well done! This is how you create a first chapter. Tempt the reader (and the main character) so they cant wait for the second chapter.

Very good story so far.

Can't wait for the second chapter.

Beautiful opening. Here to learn how to the devotion of my favorite admirer. Taking my cues from Sea. Sweet.