by vyasya
Great job! Ur stories are always my favorite! Cuckolds without losing their wives love! Intelligent and well written! Well done!
i'm glad you continued this with pratik. hope to read more soon. fantastic job. i love the indian cast. Pls continue the neighbor one if possible.
thanks a lot for coming back. now don't wait another 2 years for part 12. post it right away.
the series was awesome.. one of the best i read... but its time to end it.. this chapter was a bit boring..
i wish you would start a new one.. really looking forward to a new one...
thanks for the great series
One of the best writers around at lit. Great to have u back.
Now only if u can start the disgusting neighbour series as well with a new chapter..... Would that be asking for too much now ? ;-)
He left her and went to Denver alone. Who would stay with the cunt? Badly done drivel.
Expect a little more details on the affair with Dolly, this is the first time Sameer gets a taste of someone other than Rohini, that is outside the swap! Also more details should be given in the form of dialogues on Mayuri's reaction to the romantic affair when she comes to know about it! This can't be finished in a single paragraph, it is a junction where for the first time Mayuri will feel threatened about her marriage if she wants her marriage to continue while cuckolding her husband! She will not feel threatened by Rohini because of her low sex drive as she have been made to believe, and also because they are both in the plan for Mayuri becoming a mistress of Shrini! It's actually very important to find how she reacts and how she handles the situation!
There can be no moral grounds Mayuri can have anything to say about Sameer and Dolly affair, it was she who opted for an open marriage instead of a swapping, so how can she question affair with Dolly? In an open marriage relationship is not bound to Rohini alone!