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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Small edits, please.

You need a bit of editing on this.

"..and a little hangover."

would read better as " a little hungover." or even "and had a little hangover."

Also, you wrote "drilling" rather than "filling" which in the context you used, I think was what you meant.

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