All Comments on 'Julie's Mistake Ch. 21'

Keep it cummin'.

come on grantlee.you can do better than this...

Nice variation by introducing Mr Woo and Laura. Got potential. But the best is still Julie and Gene. Can't wait to see how that develops.

Best series on the site. Keep it going buddy.

Loved this story. i always thought that the first 5 chapters were the best. In my appreciation you are now returning to that superb level of erotic literature. This is superior to all other stories on this site. Keep up the good work, GrantLee!

the story is still better centred on Julie... esp the Gangbangs. least interesting is Pamela the MILF.

I've read ever one of these stories countless times. Laura and especially Pamela just don't do it for me. There seems to something more intense when Julie is in the picture. I want to know if she ever gets back at Hall, etc.

Woo is not a Japanese surname. Pamela and to a lesser extent Laura just not as hot as Julie..

I'd love to see Julie completely get taken over and manipulated into a permanent toy. This story could be reminiscent of "The Mortgage" a classic by Marlissa.

This is still one of the best stories I've read anywhere.

Just more Julie please.

Thanks for this one. I loved every single minute of it. The journey from innocence to sexual awakening in such disturbing conditions makes these stories so compelling to read once started.

I still flinch when I see the word co-ed so in appropriately used (short for coeducation), but perhaps it's an a local thing where you live, but if this is the only fault in a great series.

Excellent work, I can't wait to read more.

Awesome work!! Love Julie and Laura...

Man, I miss this series. Gotta be the best on here!

great story, anxiosly waiting for next chapter

owhh. Laura's ass should have been plunged by now.

I have returned to this story again & again. Chapters 6, 20 & 21 are my favourites and usually 'do the job'. Excellent atmospheric writing, perfect pace. Extremely depraved, of course, and would be horrible to experience in reality, but works very well as a fantasy. 5 stars. Deserves more!

For sure, I agree that yours are some of the best nc stories out there. But what’s with all the complaints about Pamela and Laura? Is it because they’re not blonde? Is it because they’re either too old (Pamela) or too young (Laura)? Is it because neither of them are lawyers? I just don’t get the problem. Don’t get me wrong, reading about Julie is always great, but cmon, Pamela and Laura scenes have been quite steamy. And the possibilities are nearly endless (ahem, forced mom and daughter gang fuck or incestuous lesbian sex, just sayin). The Pam and/or Laura scenes have been my favorites so far. And please bring back the old man from across the road (whom everyone else also seemed to hate, but I loved)! Thanks for these many hours of entertainmentt!

Oh, also, more rectal fingering and humiliating assfuckery, please.

-BR