All Comments on 'Julie's Strip Search'

Good story, good plot but missed on the realism aspect. A reader gets more engaged if they feel the events are possible, it could happen to them, and they relate to the charai better. If your main character was taken to a private room and stripped an a guard left a door open so others could see for example

Silly but I liked it. Keep writing. A bit choppy in places. gave ya a 5 to start you off.

Not bad but a bit rushed and, as a previous comment said, would have been better with an element of realism. Also your main character switched names between Julie to Julia a few times which was a bit sloppy. Keep going though.

Good story. Funny ending with her having to run past everybody and then back because she dont know it was in the front of the plane.

Great story!

Fun story and an easy read. it's interesting that all the critics are always "Anon" with no stories of their own. Keep writing

Super hot! Keep it up! Love the huge tit enthusiasm

Wow an airport that strips you in front of everyone . Wasn’t aware of that.