All Comments on 'Just Having More Fun'

Really? Tommo.

Next part with DP ir interracial adventure.PK

When Jimmy, packed his lorry and set out for greener pastures, without even a, "bye luv." ?

Smelt, any of a family (Osmeridae) of small bony fishes that closely resemble the trout. "we smelt bacon sizzling" ? Really? Smelt bacon sounds fishy to me.

Of course likable characters and a decent plot would be even better. BTW - horrible names for you characters.

1 star

You spin a pretty good tale but need to pay closer attention to your writing craft. This is a copy & paste from your story: (Tommo was pushing his cock between my tits in time with Tommo thrusting in to my pussy. ) This pulls a reader out of your story, which is something you don't want.

All in all it's not bad. Keep on writing! cd

Oh, got it. Above comment not applicable to this marriage.

To the unknowing. This is set in Aus.

Tommo is a common nickname.

Outside of North America, t instead of ed at the end of some words is acceptable.

Thanks for the comments. We are Not authors just people having fun and writing of our past couple of months. Most of the 3 stories are true. Maybe that's why it's boring for some.We did not realize loving wives section was viewed by people who hate women you sad people.

Sorry our names are terrible but that is our names (blame our parents )

Australians shorten everything Tommo, Robbo ,Stevo that's what we do !!

And smelt is a word in Australia ,that is how we were taught.

What the hell is something named Tommo doing in this cuck story.

she had a 4 some with Tommo and Ann...then we find out Tommo's wife is Lee... Who the fuck is Ann ??