All Comments on 'Just Once More'

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AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

hot hot pussy

ScribblerosScribblerosalmost 20 years ago
Hot story chaps!

This is a hot and sexy story. Its a bit short, but you will love to read it.

DebonaireloverDebonaireloveralmost 20 years ago
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you make me so horny

Whispering_Wolf57Whispering_Wolf57almost 20 years ago
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I love all of your works. You get better with each new story. Like a fine wine. you just get better with age...

Papa-JoePapa-Joeabout 20 years ago
Great ,for a short Story

I dont why some People are complaining?

Unless they are Writers themselfs and have written much better then this!I thought it was good

Mikki69Mikki69about 20 years ago
good short story

The story did its magic on my panties, mmm soaking wet

dsidedsideabout 20 years ago
It was OK

I guess, but it wasn't long enough to really be sure.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
edits necessary

short story? if you edited it and deleted the grammar mistakes you would have about 3 sentences left.

angel4u2lust4angel4u2lust4about 20 years ago
its a great short story

The story wasn't weak just the mind of the person posting their stupid comments, don't you know what a short story is?

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