by Erotica_Writings
This is a hot and sexy story. Its a bit short, but you will love to read it.
I love all of your works. You get better with each new story. Like a fine wine. you just get better with age...
I dont why some People are complaining?
Unless they are Writers themselfs and have written much better then this!I thought it was good
short story? if you edited it and deleted the grammar mistakes you would have about 3 sentences left.
The story wasn't weak just the mind of the person posting their stupid comments, don't you know what a short story is?