All Comments on 'Just One Small Problem'

I selected this story for a review in the New Story Reviews of the Author's Hangout, Lit Forums.

Very well written; the shy man gains confidence in a very believable way, even given the unbelievable circumstances. And on top of that, it's just simply hot as hell. Well done!

Great story! Well written. Great slow build up to the finale.

absolutely brilliantly written story!!! there's no other way to describe it. and it's so plausible too.

Was hot but could have used more proofreading, too many typos.

which any mentally astute lawyer would have seized: upon leaving the water, approaching the ladies, declared to them that this was an official 'Nude Beach, no clothing authorized', putting them on the confused defensive from the onset. But it wouldn't have changed any pf the rest of the story, everything else having a very nice outcum.