by writeroticlit95
Premise with possibilities.
But boring to the extreme.
Every interaction is automatic and mechanical.
No tension.
No foreplay.
No teasing.
One star.
I liked it better than anonymous did. But I basically agree with him or her. You need erotic detail. Not just a mechanical sequence of different positions.
I did enjoy it but as the others have commented it seems a bit mechanical? The concept is spot on though
Tess (uk)