All Comments on 'Just Too Happily Married'

Never quite figured out how and why his relationship with his kids went to zero.

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And based on what the slut told him about why she cheated and how easy it was…for her to bother to find him again was weird….and for him to take her back was preposterous!

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2 **

What a faggot cuckold .

Hope her next boyfriend gives them both aids .

One star

Good writing, but frustrating? Why did kids turn against him? Why does Barb even want him back? She says he's boring.

Great story and again very well told and written. I guess in life the good guys frequently take it in the shorts. The storyline, why would his kids so easily get over her total betrayal and take her side ?. She was willing to leave them too.

The wife is a nasty cruel hearted cunt who deliberately preys on weak people and callously manipulates her own children. Both children are stupid, entitled, cunts who have no sense of loyalty or morality. The judge, who moonlights as an unlicensed therapist, thinks he’s god. And worst of all the husband is so stupid and obtuse that he probably deserves the fucked up family he has. In short there is absolutely nothing to like about it. One star is overly generous for this crap.

A simp in the end, just like she always knew he was.

To answer the folks wondering why his kids, and his sisters turned on him: no one respects a weak man.

He talked tough, he even walked a bit of the walk, but in the end they were certain he would fold.

Which he did seeing as how she was able to weasel her way back into his life.

The kids will be back with palms outstretched soon enough.

1 star - just sooooo faaarrrr out in left field that I really really do not like this story at all.

I can't believe you are actually trying to convince us the ex-husband took the SLUT back - no way in hell.

RAAC rules say no way they EVER get back together.

Just another pathetic cuck story.

Just went on and on and sooooo dragged out!

No real explanations about the kids or what happened or why?

Just another slut and wimp story that went on forever.

Pathetic

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The judge, wife and children should be living at the bottom of a quarry

Brilliant story. Absolutely lived it.

I also love how it fires up all the knuckle draggers who in their misogyny hate every story where th female is not subjected to circumcision then sold into a 3rf world brothel. Their indignation cheers me up no end

This is beyond idiotic. NO one could be as stupid as this man. And the kids doing a 180 after they found out their mon was a cheating whore...BS! Him taking her back after her little speech before the judge?

You must be out of your mind to think this story anything but trash.

This story is an insult. You portray the MC as a complete fool. No. Brain dead is closer to the point. She cruelly eviscerarates him in front of the judge. His kids betray him and then, FINALLY, he wake to what a Gomer Pyle he really was. The trope, I love you, I'll always love you" is just plain stupi.And, finally, when she finds him, he totally caves to become the cuck she trained him to be.

Christ, no wonder she and the kids had no respect for him.

It's hard for me to believe that, at heart, you're a cuck.

God, I am so done with you🤮

You painted a picture of a fucking, stupid idiot in such a way I hated him. For that I’m giving you 5 stars, but no one is that stupid.

dude must love the taste of her shit. kids can fuck off, would not give them spit in the desert. fuck them all!!!

I liked the story 5*****. But I think the kids were little shits and didn't deserve their father.

The kids. The story wouldjzbe been sweeter if he really dismissed his old life and moved his love life on….

The real truth is ypu told a super story. The wife in the end got her way. She never said she was sorry even that she got caught. The kids neede a reality check and we’re selfish to the core. You didn’t finish the story so 3. What happened to the kids? What possessed him to first run away and thrn take her back? Where was her female? Even the judge finally gave up…

You've just written another lw cuck husband character. This one is more egregious than most. So, you get 1 star and five "fuck-yous".

Loved it until the out-of-the-blue reconciliation.

You did a great job evoking his despair and devastation, especially after her speech about why and how she betrayed him. No way could I see coming back from that.

kiwiunter sucks barf, and loves it. story is perfect for is diestion.

Was a good story until the rushed ending, that reconciliation was unexpected and totally out of kilter with the rest of the story, felt like the author just copped out, disappointing

I liked it, another sad story about love and loss, I liked how you wrote it, I liked it pace, but to me it’s missing just that bit about her,

I liked it a lot! however, it needs more, about her. more insight as to why she did it maybe some of her perspective. Also needs more about the kids and why they turned on their dad like that when he was not at faut and how maybe they felt like shit for what they did to him.

After reading what she wrote in the text messages and hearing what she said in that counselling session there is no way even remotely this ends up in reconciliation, the fact it has just completely ruins the story. I give it a 3 for the writing alone.⭐️⭐️⭐️

It's an interesting story and I really liked it. It makes you think about the couple after reading the story. Totally enjoyed it! Keep writing, carvohi!

I posted my previous comment without reading other readers' comments first. Having read all the comments, I've realized how many idiots are out there hanging out on Literotica. Am I one of them by association? I really hope not. To all the haters out there - start writing your own stories for your own consumption. This will save you disappointment and will save us from your idiotic comments. The author must be laughing out load reading them. I really hope he does.

No man should take such humiliation, such degradatiom. He should just shoot the judge, Barb, her lover, his daughter, his son, then kill himself. What he had was not living.

The "author" is a rambling fool who has zero direction. The MC is a gutless cunt who obviously wants to be controlled by everyone. Pure rubbish

He made a big mistake. first she cheated on him, then alienated his children. Then she must have seduced the judge, because he said he had seen her apartment. Then she moved back in an kept alienating his kids. I would have had her arrested for stalking at the bar and chess games. then get a restraining order to keep her cheating, lying ass away from me. Damn she must have had some good pussy.

Strange this has such a low score, I think there was a shock of reality in Ryan's breakdown where he wrecked his family, a fuse he lit when he asked his daughter to hack the wife's phone and then never followed through or made sure the kid didn't read the texts. That's really where it happened. And you can say yes, he was abused, cheated, used up, and taken for granted, he lost the respect and love of his family for that mistake and his violent acts at the realization of what his wife was really doing. So yeah, had he had his wits about him and reacted differently he could have avoided that but his kids were quicker to forget and forgive. Still love to read a follow up, the kids are what in their 20s at this point just left hanging while their parents go native and basically run away with the circus? perhaps it's not Barb who needs more story but the wreckage she left in Maryland to chase after her ex husband. I guess I DO wonder what she occupied herself with between the time of the divorce and her chasing Ryan down. Might be fun to see this young Matt fella walk into their bar also in a sequel. You got another one in you for this crew Carvohi?

I could not get past page two you made him totally brain dead.

This has to be the most stupid RAAC story ever written!

read it again and hated it more than the first time. I agree with the one who said they should all be living in the bottom of a rock quarry. Then throw in kiwihunter and the other cunt, and then the MC on top of them all.

NOT a one but FIVE ZEROS.

What a piece of BS!! She cheats and then basically eviscerates him and then, when he finally has seemed to come to his senses, he lets her back into his life!! One would have expected that he should have now been smart enough to see that she had “run out of aces” and knew just where to find a sucker to ensure she could keep eating!! Can’t feel too sorry for him…. STUPID IS AS STUPID DOES!!!

The writer is so frickin stupid to think that the dad would be this dumb in this day in age regarding technology like a phone and all of its abilities. Maybe if the guy was in his late 70's, for crying out loud you make this guy out to be a bumbling fool. Get with the real world. The fact the daughter tells him to read the texts and he avoids that and asks the wife stupid questions indicates the lack of intelligence of the writer. Good grief.........

I liked the story overall but felt it got lost before he took action. To quote another song "when your in love with a beautiful woman" a man in this guys position would never have stopped noticing signs especially if she was attractive. i find it unbelievable that a husband doesnt see the signs and act on them. Its boring too while the mc faffs about when he should just take action. Just my view and Im sure others will think the opposite.

I thought the sessions with the Judge were interesting but long.

Why in the world get back with her? How could he ever recover the way she trashed him.

"Buy a girl a drink?" Hell NO!

This story was shit. I almost stopped reading, but figured since I'm half way through I'd finish it, only to be left even more disappointed. The grammar was terrible. The dad was too naive. The kids new exactly what happened but then ended up siding with their mother? His sister too? Pretty sure the judge acting as counselor falls under conflict of interest as well. Pretty sure he wouldn't side with the mother in a no fault state over adultery on her part, also having transcripts of her saying she loves another man and will do anything for him to include leaving her husband and kids behind. Also, what is with all the redundant clips? He was in the midst talking about his wife and then suddenly starts going on about his military career. What the fuck is that? It's like he has a.d.d but instead of being distracted by a squirrel, he gets pulled into a military flashback. Furthermore, why would he take her back? Again, he has transcripts of her saying she would do anything for another man including leaving him and her kids, she turned his kids and sisters against him, she played the martyr at home to draw sympathy, she played the pity card in front of the Judge, who by the way out of left field decides then that he sees her for who she is, and she made her bold confession where she trashed him in counseling. Oh, and she showed up out of nowhere like a fucking stage 5 clinker. Fucking psycho. What ever happened to the kids? They were in and out of school, but that was prior to mom and dad's mediocre reconciliation. The writer has a long way to go.

Yeah by the end I'm convinced Barb is a sociopath. And he ends up back with her at the end - are you freaking kidding me? Fuck he's more fucked up than her I guess. Must be a masochist.

Ugh. Sorry, I can't go there. What a waste of two lives

The author has second thoughts at because, though technically well written, the story is absurd. Unusual for this author.

Please

Do mot write a sequel. Give him a feast after his castration

As for the comments about the Judge I worked for one much like the one in this story. Yes, he counseled people, yes he got his ass chewd out by the chief judge and, yes years later he was kicked off the bench for being dumb in a no dumb zone, but he was not corrupt just stupid. Very out of touch with the real world and foolish.

Ryan is not dumb. YOU wrote him that way. Why? Seems real stupid to write Ryan as the strong guy, who kicks his cheating wife OUT - and then turn him into a friggin whimp when he leaves the slut. Why would you do that? Not character continuity in your writing.

And, why were the dumb kids PISSED at slut’s actions of adultery and then be all happy to have her around and scamper from the Dad they loved and supported before the Big Discovery?

You wrote this very poorly.

Please, contact me with your defense of this awfully submitted drivel.

"Ryan is not dumb. YOU wrote him that way." Excuse me, but in fiction characters are devloped entirely by their author, not in any way by the readers.

Five stars.

First reaction was Ryan wasn’t happy either but he felt his wife owed him because he”sacrificed” for the family. His reaction was this is the thanks for doing the right thing. His wife was guilty of being a shallow person and never trying to “know” her partner. What’s up with the kids. The daughter “loved daddy”as long as he was doing something material for her. The son came across as a “bump on a log”lazy ass dope. He actually left noting of value behind and should have had zero trouble never seeing if hearing from the lot of them again. My rake in the Judge is he saved Ryan from losing his shirt. Barb was a “forever trying to capture her youth” immoral woman that many guys would love to f—-, but never enter into a mono. relationship with….no way.

Ryan was a victim of trying to do the right thing. Think how devastating it would be when you wife betrays your trust ? Your kids point out she is cheating and then condemn you for a slight misrepresented reaction. How disgusting it that? He should have never let her back in his life nor should he h as be ran away.

I decided the point of the tale was some people are suckers for misery sake and no point in trying to apply common sense, integrity or well a set of balls. I think the writer, who I love the stories, was making a statement that some people cannot help themselves.

A wimpy, coward, spineless husband. Actuly, a pie e of crap.

This is so bad it's breathtaking. Any lawywe would say that the judge alone is bullshit. You might as well write Sci Fi. The raac expresses degenerate misandry.

Tragic and though diminished by time, unresolved. Was it 'hormonal menopause'? The pain and family damage was still the same. (Kismet?)