All Comments on 'Kaitlyn's Rules Ch. 03'

There is a lot of like about this, especially cruel Kaitlyn. But there are some unresolved aspects that distract. How does he or she ever study for school? How can he be such a deep sleeper that he never notices her locking/releasing his bondage? It is difficult to pity him, since he should be able to easily overpower her at some point. This will quickly become repetitive unless you do something dramatically different, like public humiliation. Why not a piercing or a tat? A collar? Many tasty possibilities, so i hope you continue.

Well said, steph2004ster. I appreciate the speed of the new chapters, but either their intensity must increase or they will wallow along to some conclusion. Hopefully both. She clearly has him where she wants him.

I was expecting a pegging session with a strap on. I guess it's going to take longer butt plug training (with progressively larger sizes) first? 4 Stars

Hope to read more of Kaitlyn’s adventures and what she does next.

Does he ever get to cum and did he actually pass his collage course with such a delightful distraction I know I wouldn't be able to concentrate on the lectures

Like the story in general but your protagonist is clearly not into butt stuff and she is forcing him into it, or at least beginning to. That should probably be dropped. Otherwise well done

to jmkuehn

Like the story in general but your protagonist is clearly not into butt stuff

Where did you get that from? The only rules stated were not to be cuffed all night and that she had control of the cage.