All Comments on 'Kalpana & "Sir" Ch. 04'

Great job, friend. You have real talent, and I am happy that you have found time to publish the latest sequel.

Do you plan to write another in the series, My Chakkar with SC? That is another great story line, with lots of potential.

This series is VERY VERY EROTIC & TOTALLY REALISTIC.

The characters are properly developed.

We the readers can infer a lot about Kapil's thoughts, his emotions, & his innermost world in general. In Ch. 4 we realize 2 things:

(a) Both Shyam ("Sir") & Kalpana want to continue the affair

(b)Kapil LOVES when another man fucks his wife.

What we have here is a MÉNAGE À TROIS in all but name!

Hi indian_exec2000:

Thank you for this series!

Really excellent piece of imagination. Writer has s flair for writing and his ability to develop incident after incident is commendable. I give 5***