All Comments on 'Karen's Awakening'

Try a little harder to keep the names straight. Sally or Francesca?

A good premise for a story but poorly written.

Loved this story! Great idea. Just a suggestion, characters don’t always have to have names. They can be Mom or grandma. Found it difficult to keep straight who was doing what to whom. Another suggestion, read your story out loud. It helps me find logic or sequence errors.

Keep writing! You are a talent.

Hugs

R

A very good idea for a storyline and I hope the four women have a follow up session but if they do I hope the writer will settle on one name for the friend, either Sally or Francesca,

@robingreen678 Thank you, Robin. Really appreciate your thoughtful comment.K xxx

@AliceGee Thanks Alice. Yes, I failed to sport one change. Its very irritating!!! Thank you for your support. Where in the UK? K xxx

Confusing names keto changing

I don't tire of this story and found the way the afternoons activities evolved to be subtly arousing and the pivotal moment of sexual contact was handled delicately and erotically. Not an easy feat to achieve given the subject matter.

Thank you Partyof1....xxx