All Comments on 'Karen’s First Professional Outing'

Well done, made me hard

This really needs an edit and explanations as it sounds like this is part 2 or 3 of a series but you only have 1 work listed.

would love to read more stories , especially the ones mention duing the start

This was a very good first story. Keep it up, but maybe get help from an editor for future submissions. I think Karen could have an interesting career!

BTW I love your user name.

toesucker1: Thank you for you advice. I'm working on the second in the series and I may well reach out to an editor. I rather like your name too, especially as an action!

Superb, really loved it. More pse maybe a prelude to earlier story about Fransesca and others...

Thanks Anonymous. Glad you liked it. Yes, there will be a prequel coming, but not immediately.

I just love the idea of this. I had a friend who would go to the nicer downtown hotels, dressed for a night on the town just to meet interesting women and have sex with them. It's certainly on my bucket list, now.

Consider finding an editor to clean up grammar and usage, to make the text less opaque. Your stories will just pop!

@dreadwriter6969 thank you so much. Really appreciate it. It’s a favorite idea of mine too. xxoxx K

A good read, and as some have pointed out you need an editor to help with the grammar. I want to encourage you to go further and add little things to the story along the way.

Who were Judith and Ann? I gather they and Francesca enjoyed some incestual adventures to lead Karen to this point in time.

I am happy to assist you if you are interested.

Good story.SHOCKING GRAMMAR!.And why the switch of p.o.v part way through?Very confusing and off putting.Sorry.Only 2 stars for this one.

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