All Comments on 'Karma's Bitch Ch. 01'

Interesting start to a series of scenes, but the ending to this chapter was unrealistic

This is sltb1996. Please feel free to leave a comment or send me a PM with suggestions for the next few chapters. I plan on getting started on chapter 02 right away. Thanks!

I really liked what you've done so far, for the most part. I also know how hard it is to proof what you've written, especially when it's digital, so a good editor never hurts. That said, I hope you do continue this and I look forward to your next offering.

Now you've got my attention, let's see what you do with it. I'm intrigued and looking forward to part 2

This shit is broken starting at the point where you got "ashley madison" mixed up. Giving your characters their own names might help.