by Lookingsubmissive1428
Most entertaining.you could almost feel her frustration mixing with her enjoyment...nice first try...I look fwd to more..regards from Tim downunder
Yes please! I am eagerly awaiting the next adventure. Excellent story. Well written. The imagery is spot on. I feel like I got to watch the video too! Good job.
Well, one could feel the frustration and humiliation and outright joy she was going through for the several hours of her new hobby. Please write more of her adventures. An easy 5 stars. Well paced.
Great first story. It was alot of fun to read. Not so much the piss but the rest of it.
This was a great story! I hope that you will write more about Kate. Thanks!!
Vivid detail, well told. Painted such a clear visual, you could feel Kate's variety of emotions. 5 stars.
Excellent story! 5 stars. Hoping to read many more of Kate's adventures. Imagine if the security cameras were being monitored. Who else might know her secret?
Very well written. Thanks for the time and effort. Loved the robot twist. Keep up the great work.
A fellow author.