All Comments on 'Katie Kant Breaks Out Ch. 01'

You seem to have a penchant for dropping words, or having incorrect words parachuted in:

Dropped a word in the first line

And in the first line of the second paragraph

My roommate went silence ? Perhaps autocorrect miscorrected for you?

He came in pants that he ran for the hills. Another autocomplete miscompletion?

do have a bone now . . . 'You' got left out, in which case 'you' would have been Kevin

won't work for me so of you want to . . .if your autocomplete worked, this might have been if.

I did see a suggestion elsewhere promoting recording yourself reading the text, then listening to your voice reading the text. This proposal makes the irregular words become highlighted for correction.

Great set-up with a dry run that completely passes muster with the friend.

Bring this through conditioning to become adept with the heels, accustomed to the corset and satisfied upon make-up decisions. Many of us will be waiting.