All Comments on 'Katrina Ch. 07'

I'm sorry that the chess moves didn't appear as we intended but it is still readable. I helped Susan lay them out and they looked good in preview but got a bit scrambled during publishing. Never mind, don't let it take from what is otherwise a good story.

Anne.

It looks ok to me. Just the chart showing the positions before the game began. I'm sure people will see you tried to do something a bit different here and will overlook that.

As you said the whole purpose here is that Katrina was involved in the game and she got naked at the end. You did more about her growing relationship with Mike and introduced David to the story too.

Kim (kiakim12)