All Comments on 'Katy's Body Pt. 07'

Story is okay and model is nice but you should try to expand your imagination. Pictures are basically the same in each story and your writing needs depth. I recommend another set of eyes on your work besides your current editor's. But since this is your first attempt (7 stories) you have a good foundation to build on. Merry Christmas!

One of the most magnificent ladies I've ever seen

This story is improving in terms of the narrator's description of the action, not so much as what's *happening, as how she *experiences it erotically. ....Now, introduce drama, *conflict, rause the stakes for her, and I'll be even happier ;)

they are all good but the fact that you have an actual human is a true bonus

Have to agree with the comments. The lady is nice but each story basically shows the same pictures. You have a good start but you really need, really need to think beyond. Good luck.

Your body is alluring.

I'm a woman, an online Domme to a wonderful subbie, he knows I find small breasts sexy.

That said you seem detached, when you describe what is happening, it comes across flat.

Good luck in your journey, I'm not going for the ride after this chapter.

I love the pic of your butts and the view on your pussy from behind. Would love to see you on all 4 with butthole visible😈