by oneagainst
Hurting someone, enslaving someone who wronged is the action of a sociopath. She’s an abusive partner and it’s clear why he would cheat on her: she’s a monster. And if she has that much control over him, why not make her cheating boyfriend the best version of himself? Make him honest, faithful, dependable, a good husband and a good father.
Anything else is like beating a helpless baby.
Ok, very cryptic trying to piece backstory together in this tale. A LOT more setup and it would be nicer to have more than one page 'episodes' or 'chapters'. Looking to find better work in the future.
Whackdoodle-
It's a freakin' story. Nothing more, nothing less. If fictional writing bothers you this much, then you need to get away from this site.
SMH at your ridiculous comments
I love this story. Most of the content on here is a bit of a roller coaster for me of hitting exactly what I want to read at times and drifting off of it at times, but at least for me personally, this story is the exception. Love the progression, love the writing, love the way she controls with just the right mix of care and malice. Looking forward to reading where this goes.
Great story that flows well from start to finish. Thank you for sharing.
I do hope there is a part 3.
Stacey xxx
I don’t get it at all. There is usually a reason why your significant other would decide to screw with you but I either missed it or it just didn’t happen. Too confusing for me.
Devious and sexy revenge. Developing this further to humiliation for both Danny and Jade including the revelation of the affair would be exciting