All Comments on 'Kayla's New Furniture Ch. 06'

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joy_of_cookingjoy_of_cooking3 months ago

And ending I have never seen in a mind control story. Fantastic. Looking forward to your next story

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

And everybody got what they deserved

Royb8771Royb87713 months ago

Interesting ending. I look forward to learning more about the lily connection

Qwer12Qwer123 months ago

Well done and well played. Interesting. Looking forward to the next phase and what new life she may find up ahead. Rock her on. Cheers

MartyHunterMartyHunter3 months ago

I'll join the congratulatory wankfest in there and add my kudos to the pile. I was overjoyed when I realized Lily was The Lily, I really wanted more for her, especially after reading her final critical response. If you start using this as an Easter Egg/Trope in all of your stories, I'm going to have no choice but to read them all. Oh woe is me, such torture to read quality erotica with decent plots. I am truly cursed. ;)

oneagainstoneagainst3 months agoAuthor

@MartyHunter T-minus 11 days to A Place For Us All To Belong Ch 01 - featuring The Lily, and also The Kayla. Odd though, that Lily managed to turn up in a completely different story universe... must be a continuity slip on my part, surely. She can't slip between universes... surely? Hmm, Voice Assistant's FMC is called Alena. Huh?

nellie1766nellie17663 months ago

A magnificent achievement.

A truly erotic story with an ethical message.

And well written.

And hot af.

Amazing

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At last we begin, and from the smallest of things: a mistake. Cassie asked for the free will to make her own choice at the end of Wonderland, but she did something unexpected. Instead of keeping free will for herself, she gave it to her nemesis, Lily. Now Lily is free to wand...

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