All Comments on 'KDS Construction Pt. 04'

Thanks again for reading this. Since I had written this before, it wasn't as enjoyable to write this time, too much like work. I just read it on here for the first time. It turned out better than I thought. A big thanks to the person that jumps on everything I write with a big "1 star". I'm glad others liked it.

I'm taking a break, although I have two stand alone stories unfinished.

I have ideas for three stories for a "House-girl Rita" series. It will be an anthology with each story able to stand alone. Rita may only be a supporting player in these, or she might be the star. Still thinking.

Totally fucked up scenario that has no plausible chance for success...... and yet you made it feel so natural simple. Great job. Loved the narrator jumping in occasionally

Only criticism is the changing of groups with the same story. While I found in loving wives at the beginning I would never have known where more chapters were if I had not decided to find the author’s works. While I also detest long winded teasers it would be good to suggest future chapters will be in different groups. I would have hated to miss out I. The entire series. On that note I see the first of a Rita series.

Thank you for reading this series. I admit that it is an overindulgent mess. The original version of it was worse. Please sample some of my other works.