All Comments on 'Keira Shadows, Vampire Hunter Ch. 03'

Really enjoying the story so far. Keep writing and I will keep enjoying!

Laughed ass off when you had Gavin scare the hell outta Keira as she was...er...takin care a' bizniz in shower. Gave me proverbial image of that "oh shit" look when the kid got caught humping the pie in American Pie movie. Cept no way in hell Keira could pull tha "this ain't what it looks like" excuse.

Could feel Keira's fear at waking up all strapped & knowing a vamp was rather pissed at her. Still, ya gave that fiery "bite my ass" defiance.

After all those nice things I said about Gavin last chap. now not sure entirely if he's actually deserving. Extremely good psychological plot twist there. Makes her question the true motives of the one vamp that treated her decent.

We'll done eroticism in there also, if I smoked, would light one up after something like that. So his bite gonna turn her? Ah, cliffhangers, gotta love em'.

Keep up this unique storyweaving.

T.Oreo