All Comments on 'Kelly's New Daddy Ch. 02'

by sasharyder2

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Very very hot chapter, but I kinda wish it was a slower burn.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I made a comment in the first chapter that Frank was going to be a very rich man. Now, I can see he is going to be into making videos of Kelly and Lulu as they are being used by many, many men and possibly women. Kelly and her mom will be stars in a lot of ways as camgirls or pornstars. Gangbangs, gloryholes, father/daughter, mom/daughter, BDSM, exhibitionism, etc will be the subjects of future chapters. I would suggest a bit longer chapters and be more descriptive of what is going on. After he came on her face the chapter could have been longer as Kelly thought of what just happened, and after Lulu came home (where was she anyway?) when the Lulu saw the dried cum on Kelly's face, etc.

WhackdoodleWhackdoodlealmost 3 years ago

Gosh. What an original story. Some guy with no morals, shame or intellect, brainwashes women into being his sex slaves and to prostitution themselves for his financial benefit.

Sounds like every other cult. All that’s missing is the underage rape because your antagonist is only willing to rape adults.

How noble.

Why not just rob banks, or persuade wealthy executives to part with their money, houses and persuade the legislative branch to bring about change by passing laws?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Daddy talk is very hot, I just wish he wasn't an ugly bastard.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Lulu and Kel are both natural born Camgirls.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Super good chapter man!!!! Keep them rolling!!! It's such an original and well executed ideea as well!! Amazing work so far!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Amazing chapter! Can't wait for the next one and to see where your imagination takes you from here!!!!!!

Edward1970Edward1970almost 3 years ago

Good chapter, keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Lenora gangbang bbc

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

this is so addictive

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I love the story so far! I just hope no bimbofication happens to Kelly. Please keep her natural!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Please write some more!!! This is amazing!!!!

C_frommnC_frommnalmost 3 years ago

Sounds like Breeding time and or Gang Bang time.

AnonymousAnonymous7 days ago

This is so good. Please come back.

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