All Comments on 'Kelsey Pays For Her Crimes Ch. 03'

Long awaited is an understatement, but well worth the wait. As I waited I tried to imagine how Kelsey's punishment would go. I have to admit, even though dilatation is straighforward, you really kept me on edge until the very end.

Thanks for finishing this. It did not disappoint. I'm impressed with the humanity and sensitivity you manage to write into these stories. Bravo. I look forward to more! Cheers!

Great story

Your great stories are very similar to my fantasies... Knowing that someone else thinks about institutional punishments along the same lines is a true relief. Maybe my imagination pays more attention to technical details. I would add automatic adjustment of the vaginal and anal dilators so that they apply the same force over the duration of the punishment irrespective of how the body cavities stretch and try to adapt in the process. The bladder device should in turn apply constant air pressure. Another possibility (closer to your concept) is that the force and the pressure is stepped up every 10 minutes. Please, please, continue writing on punishment centers and come up with new punishments codes.

Thank you for the kind comment. I loved punishment stories that stemmed from a court order and that’s why I started to write these stories. I also love more automated punishments. I think in the long run the stories are going to move in that direction. If you have anymore suggestions (or if anybody reading this comment has suggestions) feel free to send me a private message. I love hearing new ideas.

An exceptional story, beautifully prepared and written, I hope you keep a copy of your penal code close to hand when you are writing.

Great writing.

One grown should be a groan.

Have you ever considered actually publishing the punishment codes ? On second thought, keep surprising us. I especially enjoyed the unemotional, clinical administration of the punishment, and hope the professionalism of the staff continues under the new management

Loved the story! Very well-written and captivating to the end. It's the first work I've read by @writingsomethingnew and certainly not last. Also love to see reformation of punishment system.

Love it! Wish I could have such a punishment!!

Please write more. Love the unwanted public nudity. I don't think the offenders should ever get gowns. More people should see them naked. Like maybe some other prisoners with mild punishments where they get to stay dressed. Or custodial staff.

And I would really like to read about people getting even more sever punishments... being on the J50-99!!!

Thank you!!!!