All Comments on 'Keyanna and Kevin Ch. 02'

I'm glad to hear that you are doing better. Your self comes first, this site will always be here.

Your story is so good and keeps you on the edge of your seat. Your writing style is almost similar to kalamazoo707 from this site. Not saying that you are copying that author but your vampire story is just as exciting.

And feeling better, great story more than worth the wait.

Can't wait for chapter 3!

I think I'm in love with this story. Please update soon. Bt 1st n foremost take care of u n ur health first above all else. I'm a regular on this site n have rarely found stories so captivating. Great work. Love it. U've struck gold with this story. I hope2see more of ur work. Myt even be ur biggest fan. Truly talented u are.

I am definitely in love with this story.

Hope you are ok.

absolutely beautiful loved it

I really loved reading your work. More please, can't wait

Yay for feeling better, always a wonderful thing, As much as we are enjoying your story being healthy is always first. That being said i love this story, let me say that again i love this story, I can't wait for Donovan to get his ass beat, that is one evil man.

Wow when i first started reading this story. I had so many emotions running

through my body. I was mad,sad,laughing, and crying at the same time. But

the most greatest part i was truly satisfied reading your stories. You get five

golden stars you truly deserve and more.

I like it so far, the only thing that bothered me a bit was the moment Eldon 'made himself invisable'. Yes I know their are unbelievable things in a story like this -vampires werewolfs- but sometimes exaggerations like that make it less 'believable'. Plus it make stories more complicated since you have to make sure everything makes sence.

Thanks for writing and sharing. M.