All Comments on 'Kidnapped Campers Ch. 06'

How about having the whores clean the place up a bit (while also bound and gagged with vibrators in their pussies, of course)?

For a little incentive: the one who finishes their chores without cumming first gets to sleep in Master's bed and gets to warm his cock all night long.

Just stupid with barely any character development.

Some anal play would be a nice turn of events for sex slaves

So yes, it went exactly where I was thinking.

It is nice that you take your time with the mom, it makes sense and makes me fine with her (thought part of that could be, that I'm getting old and she's not as far out of my "wankable-"scale as I'm comfortable to admit...

The chapter feels a bit like Filler, I mean things happen but it is more potential setup/ going through the warmup which is a setback in pace to the chapters before.

Also you did regularly use the wrong name, Julie is not in this chapter, it's always Erika you're referring to, if I didn't read it totally wrong.

So I guess I'll have to wait and see if the next chapter(s) will get back in the game, either way, keep up the good work.

Magical dick dominates doormats.

Yawn.

A slight complaint in this chapter, you keep switching between names for Erica. Sometimes it's Erica, other times i's Julie.

Easily the best series going round

Yuck!

My apologies for the errors with the names. I am adapting portions from a previous story I had written and did a search/replace for the names, but forgot to check the situations I had put them in.

Really enjoying the story, keep it coming quick :) Do you k ow how many parts there will be?

I enjoy your story very much, but I believe the story could benefit from the pov of one or more girls. The development of the characters is important in understanding their thought process and actions.

Which one would you pick?

i love Monica’s character, her scenes remind me alot of my life with my Master/Daddy

I’m happy for the apology, I really enjoy the story, but keep losing interest with the name’s changing constantly…