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Click hereOn another note, do you prefer the POV style of story, or would you rather have the main character have a name? Please let me know in the comments.
Why would one of his victims invite him to her house, 10 years later, after he gets out of prison for kidnapping, raping and using her? Then to share her girlfriend—who is so happy to meet this selfish POS— with him? Not Stockholm Syndrome my foot; Erica’s mind is not exactly right.
He doesn’t get to Dom them. No. He ended up alone because that’s what he deserved, and he should have to spend even more years alone outside to further regret the crap he did. 10 years was not nearly enough.
Loved the series. Agree there was some editing issues with characters being misnamed. I think the main character needs a a name. And as a wannabe writer I am trying to learn from mistakes and this is the second series where a character got added that turned the story dynamic in a very weird direction. I think you did the best you could to tie it up. Of course if Ashley has suddenly disappeared mysteriously that could have opened the door to Annie trying to help out her old boss. Just a thought. Thanks for your time in writing such a good story.
Some sloppy editing in an earlier chapter when Erica was the subject of interest, but about 3 tines incorrectly Julie was mentioned.
An over-long, violent, uber-mascline fantasy. I'm glad it wasn't resolved as a snuff story.
This was a really good series, especially for this website. Thanks for writing it!