All Comments on 'Kidnapped Models Ch. 04'

Thank you for the hint of the plot. All that sexual sadism leading to only one paragraph of plot development? I think the installments could use a better balance, please. Five stars on potential, at this point. JB

Chapter is too short and repetitive. We have already seen into the minds of the captives, now build on that. Get out of the dungeon. Bring on the sheikh or take them to new humiliations, perhaps public. Body mods. Collar. At this rate it will be December, 2021 before the story becomes epic.

Please dont

Very good so far. I prefer a dark ending. Thise are the hottest. I am posting since you obviously have not finished it yet.