Kiss of the Moon Ch. 04

Still littered with typos/incorrect words, please authors - if you read this, don’t use MS spellcheck, it doesn’t identify a correctly spelt word in the wrong place, loose/lose, bow/blow etc etc, please use a reliable, competent beta reader and editor.

On a positive note, most of the horrible formatting issues from Chapter1 seem to be gone.

Best chapter so far!!!

Nobody told you yet so I'll tell...

Challenge between Wolfgang and Grey-Honk - reasons for that is beyond dumb. Even among humans, when a woman tells you she's already taken, it means exactly that - she don't want you near her. So, even if you challenge somebody for her, it's already useless. And even worse - Wolfgang agree to take a challenge, instead killing that dumbass Grey on the spot. That situation really compromises the order inside or between packs, no matter their laws. In short - this one situation is logically impossible. And since you already wrote all story, I really hope not to read something like that in future...

Please check which one is correct.

Lose - when you dont have something you did

Loose - when something is not tight.

It disrupts the storyline when having to correct the words as you are reading

great job... wow i fell off my bed in excitation i love it..

Finally, you deserve a five star. Good job!

Brilliant episode. The alignment is because of the stars used to seperate chapters/paragraphs.

Do you have a sister? haha that cracked me up.

I'm loving this series so far....just a note though. I noticed I wasn't the only one griping about the alignment? I don't know if its on purpose but I'm reading from my phone majority of the time and it gets irksome....lol

I've read your stories numerous times, over and over, and they never get old. The erotic aspect is wonderful, the detail is as well and the action is stunning. If you aren't writing professionally, start. I love you for the work you do. Thanks for the good reads ^^