by wordmaster
i didnt like the boringness that justin brought to the story but the rest was hot and i had a hardon the whole damn time
...positively reeks of whacko mommy...A textbook case of maternal obsession...In short, just a whole lot of fun...Weeeee...
Now she's playing with her neighbor Justin. Pretty soon it's going to get around the neighborhood that Lori's a nympho. Some of the area men will start coming over to borrow a cup or sugar, or flour. They'll end up fucking Lori too, and she'll become known as the easiest lay in town. Now Lori will start thinking about a plan to fuck some of her co-workers.
Hmmmmm. Again. Skimmed most of this chapter. It seems the author is enamored with his ability to use words. Being a self proclaimed “word master”, I guess, makes it ok to use 10,000 words when 50 would fit better and move the story along.
I skimmed page after page of wordy drivel that became boring and not sexy in the least. This story went from enthusiastic 5’s at the beginning to sad 2’s now. So sorry such a promising series went to hell. Not sure I even want to start the next chapter. Now Lori’s jealous over a teenage girl, but not with Marie. Inconsistent at best.🥲