All Comments on 'Kooky 01'

a little less LOL and OMG Love the premiss

OMFG !

This was the worst story i have read here on lit !

I do not like to trash a writers efforts.

But when it is this bad, someone needs to say something !

So much of this was simply an attempt to fill space to make it seem like a longer story.

It takes a bit of imagination to figure out and fill some of those spaces.

Then to find so many places where needed words had been left out was frustrating.

OMG right ?

In case i had not told you, Right ?

Seems to me, this ( lets call it a story ) was written while someone was in heat, trying to get their self off with an erotic fantasy of their own. Right ?

In case I had not mentioned.

Right ?

Oh. i might not have wispered in your Buttoned Up eggs and pancakes. Right ?

Bombastic as this writing is, it is degrading to actual Crossdressers/Transvestites/Transwomen as well as the Trans community in general !

PinkPurple ( Author )

Please find a good editor !

I hope this has not come across as an angry Rant.

It was not written to be that way.

I have written this as a comment to hopefully help the author as well as anyone else reading it, who may glean helpful information from it.

I do some writing myself.

Some of my works have been published.

Simple poetry and a few short stories.

( Nothing on literotica, Yet ! )

When i am writing, i read and reread as many times as I see fituntil I am pretty sure the project has been done correctly.