All Comments on 'Korean Acupuncturist Cures All'

by kiwi857

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Good premise.

Terrible story.

Lacks details. Nothing about sex here is erotic. Just rushed.

One star.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

A 300 pound elephant would be tiny by elephantine standards

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Really?

“Quote”.

Ahhhhhh. ahhhhh...... ahhhhh. Errrrrr.... Errrrr.

and

Ahhhhh, ah.....Ahhhhhhhhh, ah, errrr. Ah..... Ahhh. Ahh.

“Quote”

I’m sure most readers know the sounds of sex, you don’t need to type it over and over again for every action.

kiwi857kiwi857almost 2 years agoAuthor

Not sure how to respond to the comments I rec'd on this story??? I wish I could get some reviewers that have actually written some works vs "anonymous" readers that toss out negativity-- especially when the story is rating at 4.3 right now. The first "person" gave me a "1"-- really??

I like input. True I should have left out the weight of the elephant and just said "elephant" or a higher weight-- I mixed up my metaphors-- gorilla vs elephant.

malabar13malabar13almost 2 years ago

I thought it was a delightful story, loved the premise. Keep up the good work.

SatyrDickSatyrDickover 1 year ago

[04.09.22]

Hawt, Rantique, und Zexxsi!

11/10!!!!!

Kramsky41Kramsky412 months ago

Good story. I love Asian women who rim my ass and swallow my cum

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