by LikesToWatchHer
I find it kind of strange that sis would strip in front of her younger brother........... not real believable........
This is an okay start to a story. It is not a story or even a chapter.
Somewhat immature and lacking credibility. I stopped reading when you got to the squirting nonsense.
Good sex. A bit heavy on the squirt, but I've seen it, they're out there.
I don't like the incest angle, but that's me. Good character development though, and a fairly clean edit job. I think I'll read another, and hope the Dane has a long one!