All Comments on 'Kristina, Day 01'

I think the plot moves too fast.. you don't establish the trust relationship.

Also, there are several distracting errors in your spelling.

Please review the usage of "of" and "off" and "taught" and "thought" etc.

But not well done or logical.The guy hasn't played in years but has a black master doll and a penetration belt with electrical stimulation?And after not being a top he jumps off the deep end? Worse to me is the lack of building trust he is doing things like posting video of her or leaving a device on her that won't let her go to the bathroom and worse could be seen by her spouse killing the marriage. I realize this is fantasy but the guy is not erotic irl scene he would be considered an abusive,clueless dom for the extent he took this to.

how could he send a married woman to her husband with a locked chastity belt on her?!! what the hell !!!