by Akashkumar888
This seems to have run its course. Time to put a stop to this and start a fresh one with a different plot and setting. The English is still lousy, you need a skilled editor.
One of the best series I have ever read. The universe which you created has endless possibilities. Keep working on it and publish other parts soon.
When will be the rest of the part will be translated to English. Still stuck to 9 episode
One of the best stories ever! It's hot and believable as well! Keep posting please
Awesome story.. one of the best series I have encountered. Waiting for next part..
Please continue with the series,this is the best writing I've ever come across,u r damn good in it dude