by SofiaLaFrench
I love stories about an older woman who takes charge of her sexuality. Well written. I am looking forward to future chapters!
OhEmGee!!! I love you all. I know these numbers will change but for only my second story I am so humbled. 704 views and rated 5 stars!
Thank you all!
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Okay story but characters came off as too naĂŻve and kind of dull. Good luck and I will be looking for future stories because I think you will do well.
"Got it goin' on? Your friends back East used to say that about Stacy's mom"
I understood that reference.
Ignore the anonymous moron who seems to expect you to have a fully developed novella for your second work. The important thing is that you continue to write and develop your art and find your voice as you say. This is perfectly acceptable for a second work. i will agree with them that I expect you will do well. Welcome to Lit!
Monday Monday so good to me, it was all we expected it to be. Such a smart young man I want to hear how he became a good lover (!)
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Nice job Sofia, I rated it 5 stars! As you warned, it took some time to reach the reading with one hand part, but I really enjoyed your vivid portrayal of slow loving sex from the female perspective. My one comment, as an older guy who's been there, is that it's unlikely a young man of Chris' age would be so experienced a lover! But times have changed, and you probably know better than I. I'm following you, waiting for more, Love
Sofia, c'Ă©tait excellent! I very much enjoyed this and have rated it five stars. The build up is exquisite.
Very well written. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. I loved the slow pace that some authors don't understand. I gave it 5 stars. Keep writing.