All Comments on 'L.A. in New Orleans Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Sorry

Wimp hubbies arn't sales leaders, thats A type and they don't share well. These stories make me glad I didn't marry a slut.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
W.T.F

Why not go the whole way and just let him fuck the wife. The husband is a total and utter wimp. He lets his wife do this? well if you continue this story I would guess the wife will be putting on a gang bang party and feeding other mens cum to the husband by chapter 4. Stupid people doing stupid things is one thing but this? this goes beyond stupid.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Keep pissing off these hyprocritical 'tards.

Gotta love it. They know what they're about to read and they read it anyway, so they're completely full of shit in their complaints. They love this shit. They live for it. They read every last story of this type they can find. For all their bitching and moaning, they can't wait to get themselves off on the next one, so keep feeding 'em. L.A. is hotter than hell. Love reading about her. Keep it up. Don't be in too much of a hurry, though. Don't just immediately have her fucking everyone. Stick with her exhibiting herself, that's where the heat of this story is found. Let it percolate for awhile. Let the city enjoy her for awhile, and keep the focus on what she wears, and how she shows herself off. You're off to a great start.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
A plot is developing well

A plot is developing but I hope it isn't just that the husband is a wimp and she's trying to please the husband and boss. There is also another element which would concern the husband gaining more status, with promotions, by getting his wife to please Gerry and all three of them enjoying the results. Baremetal, make of this more than just a series of encounters because these along make for a boring wimp story! There needs to be an underlying reason for her acting as she is other than her husband gets off on it. RAG

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 15 years ago
LA should work Gerry up so much that he rapes her

The Boss looses it and rapes her while her husband is on an errand. She uses that forced rape to get concessions out of Gerry, money, sex and having him devoted to her every whim. Let her be the little slut whore .Thanks for the story.....Rich

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Stupid People

What is it about some of the ignorant jerks who read here? These things are stories! STORIES! Understand....

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Another

Another stupid story of a wife becoming a whore with her boss, and husband is a cuck.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Who rates this so high

Husband pimps off his wife to his boss. How low w can you go.

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