by RachaelJane
Fascinating, but I'm sure the following chapters will be much more exciting. And then there is the big question: Mistresses or a Slave?
Please continue.
Well written and a very interesting concept, I look forward to further revelations.
I bet she "chooses" to become a slave. She just needs a little shove... ;)
You have created a very interesting setting. Can't wait to read what happens in part 2!
You've certainly created an interesting private world here, RachaelJane. Your different layers of social order and their functions are not easy to grasp immediately but I'm sure that all will become much more clear as the story progresses. Your story displays great imagination here---complex but enjoyable.
This is a really great opening to what promises to be a very sexy story. I much enjoyed it, thank you. xx
I really enjoyed this. You’ve done a wonderful job setting up what could be an exciting and very erotic tale. Look forward to reading the next chapter.
Exceptionally Well Written!
The story appears quite interesting and I will certainly read the next chapter before deciding if I am comfortable in continuing with the entire series. I basically am not a BDSM / NONC fan, excepting for a few nicely done stories, therefore I would not normally read such a story as this one. However, the author has presented this story in such an intriguing style, that I became entrapped and really enjoyed CH. 01.
Definitely Deserving Of A 5*-Star Rating!
I’m happy to have a new series to look forward to! I’d love to work there :). While I’m hoping she decides to go the Mistress route, im pretty sure she’s gonna have fun no matter what.
I was so caught up in the narrative and enjoying the characters and story so much, that I WAS your protagonist all along the journey. Your writing is so captivating, RJ, that I find myself not only wishing that such a facility existed (perhaps it does), but wishing that I was a woman and able to live in such a wonderful place. I can't wait for your next installment. Thank you so much!
Rachel,
Cheers!!
I really love your writing.
While I am not a BDSM fan. I do like this story, I identify as Nicole in your story.
I find myself daydreaming of such a place, yummy!
I hope you continue the series.
tedi
Great start. I am thrilled at the possibilities for this. Can’t wait for Chapter 2
What a wonderfully detailed world you have created. I’m looking forward to reading the rest of the series and I loved the naughty humor about the cucumbers!
I like it because it's story-driven with lots of details. The sex scenes don't go on forever and waterlog it, so that when they do happen they're that much more effective. I'd never guess you're straight...you sure?
Love the name of the brothel. I guess the male version would be Le Queue Content :)
😍 The Happy Cat!
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Hallo Rachael!
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Well Love, our pussies are very happy and we have only finished reading Part 1. ... Thank-You, 5-Stars and 5-Happy Pussy Orgasms!
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In Europe I'd been to some very private sex parties, and a few were a little strange with themes and costumes, mostly Vampires, Werewolves and Witches... still lots of fun and the money was good..
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But nothing even close to your "La Chatte Heureuse"!
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Sweet Goddess, I would have loved going there for a couple of months a year on vacation,,, yes!
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The Black Queen 👩🏿 and Gay kat 👩🏼!
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