All Comments on 'Lab Rat Ch. 06: "Revolution" - Final'

Oh I can "handle reading it", however it just descended into total stupidity.

The early chapters had character development and the slow build of the evil plan, unfortunately this was just a sequence of things that happened and read as seperate from the previous 5 chapters. Big fan of everything so far

It didn’t just descend into total stupidity, it was that stupid from the start. I am guessing the middle was stupid but haven’t read anything but the start and end and that was a waste of time I shall never get back.

Love how all of you read a "stupid" story till the end. To the anonymous commenter, that liked it, I wanted the protagonist to be with someone he loved, even if it was in service. You other two....you proved my point. You read it till the end. Next story might really piss you off. Thinking about doing one about a born sissy, or a Brother that has to fight to be with his sister. I will take commenters seriously when they have names. THANK YOU ALL!