by Hotelroom
Good. Another chapter would be great. Please proofread and correct grammatical errors before submitting.
Absolutely love the story! Massive fan of how she always ends up in some fun situations in your writing. Keep them coming!
Good story but as others have said there are a lot of typos and spelling mistakes. I suggest using a spell checker and proof reading next time, but otherwise an enjoyable read so keep writing.
Cant wait for more chapter's. Dont sweat the grammar and typos, I is what gives the story that extra bit of charm.
This is a fabuous story, just enough build up to sustain the heat. Please keep writing
I really like your stories. Typos are not important when the story is as good as this.