All Comments on 'Landlord'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Proofread

Good story, but really needs proofreading.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Proofread

Good. Another chapter would be great. Please proofread and correct grammatical errors before submitting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Outstanding

Absolutely love the story! Massive fan of how she always ends up in some fun situations in your writing. Keep them coming!

Time4astoryTime4astoryover 3 years ago

Good story but as others have said there are a lot of typos and spelling mistakes. I suggest using a spell checker and proof reading next time, but otherwise an enjoyable read so keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
REALY FASINATING

CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. PLEASE HURRY!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Hot

Cant wait for more chapter's. Dont sweat the grammar and typos, I is what gives the story that extra bit of charm.

shysuzyshysuzyabout 3 years ago
Wow - love this

This is a fabuous story, just enough build up to sustain the heat. Please keep writing

melsdadmelsdadalmost 3 years ago

Great hot story, looking forward to the next stage.

robertjohnrobertjohnalmost 3 years ago

I really like your stories. Typos are not important when the story is as good as this.

TurboT81TurboT81over 2 years ago

Another great story, looking forward to reading part 2

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

"I owe" should be "I own"

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

What a horny cocksucking slut. Loved it

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