All Comments on 'Langley Circle Beginning Ch. 20'

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Wiz1002Wiz1002about 2 years ago

Another great chapter with developments coming along very nicely!!

I did think it was a bit stretching it for mum and daughter to indulge in first time sex whilst Dean was just outside fixing the fence and likely to be back at any second and then fir them both to leave it to Belle to “calm the waters”. However the end sort of justified these matters and resulted in the fantastic sex/fucking between all four, which I hope and expect will lead to more in the future

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Waist - her middle

Waste - rubbish

wafflingmanwafflingmanabout 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks anon, that one slipped through. The problem with being blind is, I can spell and grammar check and read through 20 times but the one thing that is super hard to spot is incorrect use of homophones.

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Updated 19th March 2023. I have completed season 2 of Langley circle, 24 episodes amounting to well over 200k words. The first 2 episodes are at final proof stage and the other 22 are about to undergo editing and proofing. It will still be a month or so before the season is po...