All Comments on 'Langley Circle Beginning Ch. 24'

I love the story, as usual. And the introspection of the three of them on the back porch is fun. I loved how you tried to describe the camera placement and layout of the house.

The only thing I got lost in was the hallway shenanigans, which were fun. Using just the descriptions rather than the names made it so I couldn't actually follow who was going where.

Other than that small quibble, I have really enjoyed season 1 and am looking forward to season 2.

The narrative for this episode lost me in the attempt to make it seem like a TV show or Movie.

Loved the story and involved some excellent sex scenes. I did however get lost with the in between narratives to understand who was going where and in what part of the house they were in - a good idea, but didn’t quite come off. Nevertheless a solid 4*’s

This last one was a hard read. The switching of rooms to rooms like we are on tv, confused me tbh. And how many blondes are there in this story it’s hard to keep track

Looking forward to more of the Langley Circle, you are a very writer thank you 😊

Just binged this series again.

I’m eagerly awaiting part two. Thank you, thank you! ❤️❤️❤️

The switching of rooms to rooms like we are on tv, confused me

Enjoyed the relationship building in the story.