All Comments on 'Lani's Vacation'

Belongs in non-consent....even though she had a plan, she’s unwitting which makes her unwilling.

Interesting read.

ridiculous story. she was gang raped - rape is not erotic.

and another (un)liter(un)erotica 'writer' who doesn't know the difference between 'lay' and 'laid'. Or apparently 'new and 'knew'.

I like this story, but I'm not sure why. It's a little confusing in spots, and you could use an editor. Not too bad for a first effort though.

They come to a porn site to read about fucking and all they do is complain about grammar? Total losers.

And anyone who whines about which category an author puts a story in should be castrated. It's the author's choice, you fuckwad. If they feel that the aspect of multiple partners warrants it in group sex so be it. It doesn't say " only consensual group sex." Now go back to stroking that little peepee of yours and shut the fuck up.