All Comments on 'Lanni and the Professor'

Nice job!

I liked the conversational tone. You also did a good job setting Lanni up as a hottie, sexy descriptions that were evocative without falling into tedious cliches and metaphors. We

Thanks, lov3. I appreciate your input.

Doc

A marvelous little love story with an excellent plot. The characters are well-defined, and the pacing is neither to hasty or too drawn-out. The writing is very good as well. Perhaps the only drawback to this story is its brevity. One or more sequels with the main characters of this story is certainly called for. Five stars.

Sweet, loving story that was very well-written – five stars! The lengthy introduction opened the reader’s hearts to both the professor (older, widower, respects the rules) and Lanni (intelligent, young, a bit Bohemian).

Lust postponed was a great theme. Smoldering embers usually erupt into the hottest fires! Many of us have been in professional situations where we could not act. However, later…

Additional chapters could highlight the theme of “spring-autumn” relationships. These types of relationships have been around for thousands of years, and there is a reason for that. Discussing the mutual benefits to both the professor and Lanni from this age difference could be fun.

Great story!

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