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End of Part 1
- COMMENTS
Anonymous6 months agoDoesn’t any body eat there at a camp just one mentioned breakfast no then else the whole story
Anonymous7 months agoGenuinely couldn't get past the opening few paragraphs.
I didn't come here to read about how nobody wants to work these days and how the liberals and hippies are the worst. This is how a middle aged conservative dude talks. I get that on the news every day. I don't need it in my porn.
Stupid, weird, unfun.
Olver9 months agoWhat a beautiful story. I loved it and I really hope you will continue with more chapters.
Falconsbladeover 1 year agoJust a few glitches when it should have been Willow's name and not River but overall great story so far.
jwswingleover 1 year agoMinor typos; page 2, "Beth's husband Sam", incorrect. But enjoying the story so far!
NudeInMaineover 1 year agoVery nice. Being raised as a nudist, I would have loved to go to a summer camp for nudist teens with my brother say ages 14-15.
Fcksocietyover 1 year agoThis is so excellently written. Touches all the right emotions.
I'm praying for a story from the sister's pov.
How she enjoyed this experience.
That was the only major shortfall of this fine fine piece.
Keep it going. Can't wait.
