Laura Love Ch. 07

Great story and wonderful writing. Thank you, and please... Do not stop writing!!

Loved it. Great series, very enjoyable.

People often miss how difficult it is to manage multiple characters with subplots but you did a great job.

I reject the idea that your protagonist is overly cruel or sadistic. That’s the character you created. Her personality was the essence of the story. The was the centre of the entire story. I thought your depiction of her was fantastic. She was the proverbial queen and the reader knew it.

If I was to be critical, it would be that a chapter 8 was necessary to pull all your characters to the end of the story. How did Jared finally adjust to his final position as Laura’s bitch boy. How did Dr Bradford react to Jared’s presence? Did Grace finally take a position as Laura’s equal or did she remain a pet? Finally, how did Benji change after being handed over to Grace? That being said, it can get boring to write the same story for too long.

Overall, not to sound like a teacher but a great A+ story.

Enjoyed it from the start to the finish.

Laura is portrayed as too unrealistically cruel and explotive for me. Fine I suppose if that's what gets you off, but it just makes the story lose credibility and attraction for me.

I think the way Laura wields power is a bit overwelming as jared is too subservient. Then again, i'm just being annoying. You have a great imagination and could convey the emotions and power dynamics very well, a toast to that. Thank you for the read.

This is the best story writing, character building erotica I have ever read.... It just fucks your brain and enslaves you to Goddess Laura without even seeing her...

Keep it up.. can't wait to read more of it..