All Comments on 'Laura's Interview'

Loved the neediness of Laura., but the story was kinda ridiculous. And the boyfriend Michael couldn't help carry this wonderful ass-whore till she got a new job??

Drivel, poorly written and just pure rubbish. You’d better get a job in a bar yourself

Such a terrible story, please don't write anything else

Plz stop. This was stupid.

In five months this one story has earned you two followers and 18 favorites, and it’s got a 3.85 rating — not stellar but not terrible.

I think the comments would have been less harsh and the ratings better if you had put this in the fetish section instead of anal and put a warning about light scat up front.

Final tip. Don’t punctuate your dialogue like this:

"Suck it now." said Paul.

Punctuate like this instead:

"Suck it now," said Paul.

Yes, Paul’s sentence “Suck it now” is grammatically complete, but the convention is to use a comma instead of a period, because the whole thing feels like a single sentence.