All Comments on 'Learning the Lifestyle Part 6'

by Mystress_Carlie

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Excellant Storyline

Keep it up. Your writing is excellant, I loved the part "She moaned and her eyes rolled up into her head"

People not familiar with the BDSM dont under stand the intensity of the sensation. Only critism is the 2 extra slaves, Their OK but wanted to see more of Silks journey into submission with some rope work and what about that Deer skin flogger. With the 2 extra slaves she is now drenched in the BDSM life style. According to the storyline it has been only what 2-3-4 days. Please strech it out some subspace pleasure at being tied and flogged to give pleasure to her master would be nice. The first chapter it seemed the storyline was headed to the BARON Party. I thought perhaps each day till the BARONs party would build and build then silk would go to the Party and see extreme BDSM and She would volenteer to green light the limits to make her master proud. Sorry for the disjointed comments, your narritive is great its just silk stsarted almost vanillia i wanted to see more of her training and the step by step veiw of her journey to Submisson

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Excellent...

Great writing, a few errors in the grammar dept, but not too distracting. Hope you will continue this story sometime in the near future. Would love to see what happens between Michael and Silky. Thanks for a great read.

backnumberbacknumberover 18 years ago
v good

I agree with Anon from Ohio. Perhaps we could see chapters 4A and 5A and the time spaced out a bit

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
OMG

MORE please ; )

misocutemisocuteover 16 years ago
other two girls ruin it

The other two bimbos ruin it. Boo silk should get rid of them

sara2playsara2playabout 16 years ago
Great work

M'am

Thank You for some great work. i really liked the Michael and Silky characters. i like Michael as a Dominant. He's a romantic, kind, and respectful Man. Silky is a good character who is exploring a new world. i like reading of her innocence and how she is adjusting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
LOVED IT LOVED IT

I can olny wish to find a master like this,very well written very long butwell worth the read thank you please write more i wanna not what happins next!

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